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Annette Vee's avatar

This is fun! I find it interesting to see the different styles, and how the same themes can be reworked into different sentence shapes and orderings in the paragraph. I teach undergrad and graduate courses in Composition. For the same reasons John Warner cites, I would avoid this in undergraduate classes--except the ones I teach themed on AI. :)

But I think it would be interesting in grad classes, or those focused on style. I could imagine students feeding in an LLM or Wikipedia paragraph, running it through your Jamesian stylizer, then observing and annotating all of the versions: what makes it baroque? What's actually happening to these sentences and vocabulary? In which styles are you more likely to see dependent clauses? etc. Then have them work through their own prose following some of the patterns they gleaned from your stylizer: rewrite using at least three dependent clauses; make 4 of your words into Latinate versions; then do the reverse by using only sentences under 10 words each, etc. etc. That would be, I think, a productive style exercise that would help students get those "reps" that John recommends.

Nadine Bailey's avatar

It's very clever. I liked John Warner's discussion on style vs. voice. I think the former is easier to "program" while the latter takes years of practice and writing and feedback and response to hone. I've also been blogging for over 20 years - and it's authenticity that appeals to people (I hope) in some contexts whereas if you're just writing reports or "call and response" type texts I guess it doesn't really matter.

What seems to work with middle schoolers (my domain) is slower nudges - e.g. through chat bots so that they're still doing the work and refining and redrafting. I'm very nervous of the current phenomenon of the first draft being the only draft. Which has always been a student inclination but when education was slower one could insist on several (handwritten) drafts.

I'm wondering if seeing your own physical work change and improve viscerally is a different thing than seeing digital magic.

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